Looking After The Environment
I believe that you should look after the environment because if people don’t, bad things will happen. If nobody keeps the earth clean it will be a polluted dump.
I feel that if we don’t look after the environment and keep emitting greenhouse gases, our planet will get hotter. When the sun's energy comes down to earth it hits earth, gets turned into heat and bounces off. Then when it goes into the atmosphere the greenhouse gases hold the heat back. That is how our planet gets hotter.
Some people think it's okay to litter, but it's not. If people litter animals might eat it and die. Even if you put rubbish in the bin it’s going to end up in the sea or landfill. If people pollute creeks you won’t be able to go fishing because the water would be contaminated.
I believe that we shouldn't clear forests because animals live there and if we clear all plants. We will have no oxygen and we’ll die.
If everything is gone, what will you do? That is why you should look after the environment.
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Hi Rocco, I like your persuasive writing about saving the environment. Maybe next time you could not bold your writing just so everyone can see it properly. If you would like to check out my blog just click on my name.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Rocco,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Emiely (pronounced "Emily") and I am a blogger at the Summer Learning Journey. I like that you have organised your ideas into paragraphs so that one paragraph only has one main idea - great work!A very persuasive piece of writing. What things do you do to help our environment?
I know it's a bit tricky to start, but if you wanted to continue blogging over the summer holidays remember to head over to the activities page on the Summer Learning Journey website. You can do these activities in any order. Be sure to remember to post your answers onto your blog.
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Emiely :)