Hi Rocco, I'm Amelia from Awahono School. I like how you have displayed your slide show. It would be helpful if up the top you put a blurb on what it is about so we have a better understanding of you slide show. I like how you have used lots of describing words. What is Anthology?
Hi Rocco, I'm Solly from Awahono School. I like how you described the snake, I love the part where you said "venomous, vicious, reptile" it just blows me away. Maybe next time you could have the picture of the animal on the next slide so that the reader could guess before they find out what animal your describing. Can't wait to see more of your work keep it up. -Solly
Hi Rocco, I'm Lochie from Awahono School. I like how you have you used some amazing describing words like venomous and vicious. Maybe next time you could add a background but its is up to you. Kind Regards, Lochie
Hi, I'm Chloe from Awahono School. I like how you have displayed your slide show. It would be helpful if up the top you put a blurb on what it is about so we have a better understanding of you slide show. I like how you have used lots of describing words.
Hi, Rocco I'am Hunter from Awahono school. I really liked how you gave us quizzes. Maybe you could go back and make the writing bigger on slide five and six. Here is my blog if you want to check it out https://awahonohunterl.blogspot.com/.
Hi Rocco, I'm Amelia from Awahono School. I like how you have displayed your slide show. It would be helpful if up the top you put a blurb on what it is about so we have a better understanding of you slide show. I like how you have used lots of describing words. What is Anthology?
ReplyDeleteIt is a bunch of poems.
DeleteHi Rocco, I'm Solly from Awahono School. I like how you described the snake, I love the part where you said "venomous, vicious, reptile" it just blows me away. Maybe next time you could have the picture of the animal on the next slide so that the reader could guess before they find out what animal your describing. Can't wait to see more of your work keep it up.
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good idea on putting the picture on the next slide. I will do it on my next anthology
DeleteHi Rocco, I'm Lochie from Awahono School. I like how you have you used some amazing describing words like venomous and vicious. Maybe next time you could add a background but its is up to you.
ReplyDeleteKind Regards,
Lochie
I think I will do a back round next time. Thanks for visiting my blog.
DeleteHi, I'm Chloe from Awahono School. I like how you have displayed your slide show. It would be helpful if up the top you put a blurb on what it is about so we have a better understanding of you slide show. I like how you have used lots of describing words.
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The drawing is good. Next time you could try colouring it in. I love to draw.
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hi Rocco im Kyvana and I think that your poems are really good keep the poetry up
ReplyDeleteHi, Rocco I'am Hunter from Awahono school. I really liked how you gave us quizzes. Maybe you could go back and make the writing bigger on slide five and six. Here is my blog if you want to check it out https://awahonohunterl.blogspot.com/.
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